Might have said this before, but I really like the way you've been doing your comics. Having the reader stop panel by panel, it really forces our concentration in absorbing all of the little details in your story. I do feel that where No_name changes from confused to angry, that it feels a bit abrupt, and may need just an additional panel there to ease the transition of emotions, so that it feels more natural to the reader. I.e
confused->understanding/irritation->Anger/frustration. Mostly so that you continue the really well done transitions between one panel to the next.
GL for the next round
Finally had a chance to read and comment your round. Sorry for the wait. -.-‘
The sequence with [no-name] being all worried about gulper is played out really well. Love his poses and the variety of emotions he is going through. Also the sequence where Darcog was battling with the judges was choreographed very well. Everything fit together smoothly.
The round had many interesting ideas like ‘the rogue characters’ and ‘the dead character’ (YAY! You finally have a face when you are a ghost. XD) I also like how you portrayed cloudslides team and played around with their skills and mechanics.
If you don’t mind critique, some parts of the round were a little bit cryptic and took a few reads to figure out what’s going on (like the part where [no-name] is starting to use his powers). The round is probably meant to force the reader to try to interpret things, so it isn’t so much of an issue. Also some perspective problems in few panels (like the “HOLLY!” “AAAH!” panel, where bunny looks quite huge for some reason).
I really enjoyed reading your round! Good luck with the results!
I completely agree. Getting a chance to experiment and learn from it is really useful.
For me it’s more about learning comic medium in general, since I haven’t done any comics before AatR. Critiques are very useful to point out what works and still needs improvement.
Best luck to you too. It would be an honor to have you as opponent if we end up against each other on next round. I really enjoy how you write characters and your line-art very pretty to look at! ^^
Thank you, and good luck to you too!